快斷掉的回憶
詞/曲﹕陸毅為
verse: 無意間發覺你那破舊的鞋
回憶起你曾經穿過的過去
那段曾經過的坎坷路
真讓人不直覺的感嘆
verse: 綁著你那快斷的鞋帶
好像在縫補那我們快斷掉的思議
一直無法彌補的記憶
怎能讓人感受珍惜
chorus: 我們是否能再挽救
再珍惜那失去的美好過去
你是否能再次記起
曾擁有曾快樂過的美好回憶
如果機會能讓我再走過
再寫過那一直要追尋的完美愛情
故事是否再讓我們連接
那快斷掉的回憶
那所沒有過的記憶
bridge: 承受沒有你的的日子裡
我是否讓在想著你
在記得你
6 comments:
Hi Yiwei
In verse 1, "真讓人不直覺的感嘆", do you mean "不知觉“ instead?
Would love to hear your melody! Any links?
cheers
mikan
Yiwei, if I were xh, I would be damn mad at you. These are lots better than your homework, you were really pianjiak that time leh...
yiwei.. these are really full of feelings..
u can do it.. dun look down on urself ok..
Hahah because during the XH laoshi class i having problems in life . So cant concentrate well . And i better in doing my own melodies after that add in lyrics to my melodies .I will try harder .
对不起毅為! 我以上的留言不是在挖苦你， 希望你不要误会!
以前有人鼓励我说， 现在写得不好， 不代表以后也会写得不好。
你现在已经写得不错了， 所以再接再励吧! 多注意措辞+文字的雕琢， 大家都有值得对方学习的地方， 一起加油!
cheers
mikan
Hey yiwei! The whole lyrics really reveal the serious side of you.Especially the 1st & 2nd line of both verse 1 & 2.It touches me. continue to Jia you!
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